Flashbacks to key moments in Velda’s childhood or past relationships.
Detailed scenes of therapy sessions, support group meetings, or family interactions.
Expanded dialogue exploring complex emotions, conflicts, and reconciliations.
Side stories involving secondary characters who influence Velda and Dean’s journey.
Poetry or song lyrics (e.g., from the soundtrack “My Eulogy”) interwoven to reflect themes.
Letters or notes exchanged between characters to reveal inner thoughts.
Next Steps
I can help you write full drafts of any new chapters or scenes.
I can assist in creating interludes, letters, or dialogue expansions.
I can help structure the expanded manuscript for pacing and emotional impact.
Would you like me to start drafting Chapter Seven: Descent into Chaos or any other chapter? Or would you prefer to develop interludes or additional materials first? Just let me know!